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Another question for Extraterrestrial
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How should I start the story off?
With Kchrome's Point of View?
It will be starting off someway like this:
Jase, Eliot and Kchrome going through a vent of a ship they hitchhiked on and they end up in like one of those small rooms in the vents that people can live in ya know, like the one in some of the Alien movies and relax for a bit, ect ect ect and then Supreme comes in
This adds in a possible prologue to Kchrome's history as to how he learned English and became domestic. Which brings me to my other question, should I have a prologue of Extraterrestrial?
or with Supreme's Point of View
It will start off somewhat like this:
Supreme and his Paradigm break through the time lock of Gallifrey (since in one of the Doctor Who episodes, the Master calls Gallifrey to Earth) and into a different timeline/dimension because of the time lock and they're systems are kinda faulty for the moment, picking up a faulty signal at the ship Kchrome is hitchhiking and ect ect ect that's how they meet
So, what do you guys think? I kinda favor the Supreme point of view, since I can say this is a alternative universe (or AU to be exact) I can have Kchrome explain his ways through a flashback or something along those lines.
But anyway, what do you guys think?
Prologue + Kchrome's Point of View?
or
Supreme's Point of View?
With Kchrome's Point of View?
It will be starting off someway like this:
Jase, Eliot and Kchrome going through a vent of a ship they hitchhiked on and they end up in like one of those small rooms in the vents that people can live in ya know, like the one in some of the Alien movies and relax for a bit, ect ect ect and then Supreme comes in
This adds in a possible prologue to Kchrome's history as to how he learned English and became domestic. Which brings me to my other question, should I have a prologue of Extraterrestrial?
or with Supreme's Point of View
It will start off somewhat like this:
Supreme and his Paradigm break through the time lock of Gallifrey (since in one of the Doctor Who episodes, the Master calls Gallifrey to Earth) and into a different timeline/dimension because of the time lock and they're systems are kinda faulty for the moment, picking up a faulty signal at the ship Kchrome is hitchhiking and ect ect ect that's how they meet
So, what do you guys think? I kinda favor the Supreme point of view, since I can say this is a alternative universe (or AU to be exact) I can have Kchrome explain his ways through a flashback or something along those lines.
But anyway, what do you guys think?
Prologue + Kchrome's Point of View?
or
Supreme's Point of View?
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